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dream girl,

by ~moejo

once upon a time;
i was down and out
(as
always)
and the night was swiftly turning to dawn
i was staring out of my window on the
           5th floor
into an apartment 30 feet away
which was occupied by a
stunning brunette

she was in the kitchen
tugging her boy towards
her
kissing him with lips so perfectly immaculate with such
                                          ferocity
as if it was the sky trembling at rage of the old gods of asgard during
ragnork.

this went
on
and
on
for a year
   or two

i memorized every single
                 blouse
                 dress
                 tee
she wore and
every single shade
she wore them in
  and
how each garment
                                           loosely
                                    fit
(espically that blue stripped sweat shirt)
drooping as if it could no longer muster
the will
to contain such
wonder
exposing her sunkissed shoulders
   or
how they just served to fill a frame more
exquisite
than anything you could
               possibly
imagine
and the way
the cheap yellow bulb simply added
fire
to the tips of her
                        long
                            flowing
                                      mane

this went
on
and
on
for a year
   or two

each night
the same heaven
shaking
kiss
always the same
boy and
always in the
kitchen
with
the cheap yellow bulb simply adding
fire
to the tips of her
                        long
                            flowing
                                      mane


i swear;
i cannot
recall
being in such a
state of privation:

wanting to kiss
anyone
with such equal fervence
as i have wished
to
kiss
                                                             her
and
to
kiss
                                                             you
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:iconlolitaslove:
You can kiss me anywhere at any time for how ever long you like....
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~dyrwen Jul 1, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
That's pretty goddamn marvelous right there.

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" Too much symbolism annihilates the sublimated form, therefore no one mentions swans anymore."
-Noah Eli Gordon
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:iconnikarma:
~Nikarma Apr 14, 2008  Professional General Artist
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Beautiful..
I always appreciate when people take time to arrange their words to fit their writings.. :heart:

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:iconomgsara:
so honest and so cool.
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:iconperverse-pleasure:
moe, I think I love you.

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:iconarctoa:
's good stuff, mate. I particularly like the repetition and the line breaks & spacing. Your best for a while, I think: can definitely tell it's written on the wave of something.
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:iconklit-shy:
my thoughts on this, i tried to contain it somewhere outside DA. I hope you get to read it. =)

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